DanielKelly

 - Robert Jordan -  

This is where I will be  replying to other people's blog. It will be under the format of:

Name (website name)

Date

  • My coments

                                                                                                                                                                                                                      

Jesse Munnikhuis (Jessem.yolasite.com)

September 16th, 2009

  • Stephen King is a really good author, he has written many very well known novels in his life time. Since your site is under construction the information on your page right now, is not enough for me to comment on. Although you have a good home page with the map and a picture, it could still use some more descriptive text. Once you have finished your site I would defiantly come back to learn more about Stephen King. Keep up the good work :)

 Reid Cowan (Reidcowan.yolasite.com)

September 17th, 2009

  • Very well written and interesting introductory paragraph and it tells a lot about Stephen King and his early years. Your background captures my attention but the pages feel like they are bare. I feel that you need to add more pictures and information to your pages. I can see that your site is still under heavy construction so I hope these tips will help in the progression of your webpage. Once your site has been finished I would love to come back and read more interesting facts about Stephen King. Good job Reid!

Logan Smith (Mullet.yolasite.com)

September 17th, 2009

  • I have never heard of Jack London, until now. From the information that was on your site I will now strongly consider reading one of his many novels. My suggestions to your home page is that you spell check your text and maybe add more descriptive words and detail. All in all, your site is coming along quite nicely. In the near future I hope to come back to you site and read/ learn more regarding Jack London.

Ryan Gould (Omgould.yolasite.com)

September 22nd, 2009

  • JK Rowling is an awesome author, she has written many interesting book like the Harry Potter series. The novel “Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone” was an interesting read and a great movie. Even though it took me a long time to read the book, I enjoyed it in the end. The background for your site is very pleasant it captures my attention very well. Your page is lacking information and detail but has some very nice pictures. I am looking forward to seeing your site once it has been completed.

     

Derek Rous (Fiddy.yolasite.com)

September 22nd, 2009

  • Dr. Seuss! Outstanding and very interesting author, he has written some of my favorite books ever. I used to read his books all the time when I was a kid and I still read some now. My favorite books by him are “The Cat in the Hat” and “The Grinch who Stole Christmas”. They were also published as great movies. All in all, your site has given me tons of new information regarding Dr. Seuss and his writing style. You have great images and breathtaking wording, good job. 
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